As i move out of my habitat
slide into the arms of nature
as she implores me with her seductive charm and beauty
that knows no feminity
defines no masculinity
but still is the mistress of seduction
her beauty calls me and pulls me into her kingdom.
.she welcomes with a shower breeze
and showers with garlands of wind
which bring along the fragrance of the morning charm.
as my other senses crave for being quenched
my eyes drink in the greenery that surrounds
savouring the garnishing colours of flowers and barks.
my mind is enthralled by the symmetry and uniformity
in the leaves that are never alike,
my ears feed on the harmonious symphonies
that the birds and leaves together create.
the music thats raw and fresh and denuded
a music so austere and yet so ornate
a music thats an unconcealed mystery
this makes me a fanatic .. a religious fatnatic
for nature is my religion
my god is all around me
my god surounds because i seek thy not in what i see
but in the sea of my eyes
i see all around a porous beauty
for it resides not all around me
but it dwells in my sight
i worship beauty
this beauty is all that there is
for this beauty ceases to have an antonym.
6 comments:
nive its really good. m proud of u
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diksha
u are one chuppa rustum!!!i am not an authority on poetry but what i read was absolutely mind blowing.u are fantastic.keep up the good work and maybe u can write something on me!!! pls send this to some magazine.u may be a booker winner in the making!! cheers!
Debashrita
its raeally coooooooollll!! wat else i say .. i didn't had an idea that my sis can be so rockin towards the nature ...its really good i must say .... m proud of u ...yeah! thats right send it to some magzine or sme newspaper ...i m sure u'll be awarded....chuppa rustum baccha ...
good one, didnt like the end.... it started so beautifully with masculinity, feminity and all the stuff, kind of fresh but ended with religion and all that.... work a lil bit on it, dont be conclusive just leave it floating in the air...
i think you are a profeessional, so am a bit critical, don't read too much into it though. the poem on a whole was fabulous.
how did you reach my blog though?
good one, didnt like the end.... it started so beautifully with masculinity, feminity and all the stuff, kind of fresh but ended with religion and all that.... work a lil bit on it, dont be conclusive just leave it floating in the air...
i think you are a profeessional, so am a bit critical, don't read too much into it though. the poem on a whole was fabulous.
how did you reach my blog though?
outstanding soiree with Nature's Splendour, and an equally romantic piece. too guud.
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