Monday, February 12, 2007

a NEW religion


As i move out of my habitat

slide into the arms of nature

as she implores me with her seductive charm and beauty

that knows no feminity

defines no masculinity

but still is the mistress of seduction

her beauty calls me and pulls me into her kingdom.
.
she welcomes with a shower breeze

and showers with garlands of wind

which bring along the fragrance of the morning charm.

as my other senses crave for being quenched
my eyes drink in the greenery that surrounds
savouring the garnishing colours of flowers and barks.

my mind is enthralled by the symmetry and uniformity
in the leaves that are never alike,

my ears feed on the harmonious symphonies
that the birds and leaves together create.

the music thats raw and fresh and denuded
a music so austere and yet so ornate
a music thats an unconcealed mystery


this makes me a fanatic .. a religious fatnatic

for nature is my religion
my god is all around me
my god surounds because i seek thy not in what i see

but in the sea of my eyes
i see all around a porous beauty

for it resides not all around me
but it dwells in my sight

i worship beauty
this beauty is all that there is

for this beauty ceases to have an antonym.

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

nive its really good. m proud of u
..


diksha

Anonymous said...

u are one chuppa rustum!!!i am not an authority on poetry but what i read was absolutely mind blowing.u are fantastic.keep up the good work and maybe u can write something on me!!! pls send this to some magazine.u may be a booker winner in the making!! cheers!

Debashrita

Anonymous said...

its raeally coooooooollll!! wat else i say .. i didn't had an idea that my sis can be so rockin towards the nature ...its really good i must say .... m proud of u ...yeah! thats right send it to some magzine or sme newspaper ...i m sure u'll be awarded....chuppa rustum baccha ...

Ankur said...

good one, didnt like the end.... it started so beautifully with masculinity, feminity and all the stuff, kind of fresh but ended with religion and all that.... work a lil bit on it, dont be conclusive just leave it floating in the air...
i think you are a profeessional, so am a bit critical, don't read too much into it though. the poem on a whole was fabulous.

how did you reach my blog though?

Ankur said...

good one, didnt like the end.... it started so beautifully with masculinity, feminity and all the stuff, kind of fresh but ended with religion and all that.... work a lil bit on it, dont be conclusive just leave it floating in the air...
i think you are a profeessional, so am a bit critical, don't read too much into it though. the poem on a whole was fabulous.

how did you reach my blog though?

Indrajit said...

outstanding soiree with Nature's Splendour, and an equally romantic piece. too guud.